onsdag 15 april 2009

Feed-back on version 0

From: David Lister
Date: 2009/4/14
To: mosquito@se.cisv.org

Hi to the Mosquito people.

I do not like the spelling mistakes or the use of bad English. For instance, you cannot use a phrase “piss me off” in a document like this.

I do not understand the relevance of the pictures to the content and what appears to be a map of the world is just not recognisable if that is what it is meant to be.

Is this for the whole of CISV or just Sweden because I do not see the connection with the whole world of CISV. I think CISV International is only mentioned once.

How much money has been wasted on this especially from UNESCO. I have just seen an email which professes to say that the young people in Sweden are responsible people, this document makes me want to query that.

David Lister


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Note (from the Mosquito tactics team): David Lister is an Honorary Counsellor of CISV International.

2 kommentarer:

  1. Dear David,

    I most strongly disagree with you! This book is an intriguing and engaging read that actually communicates what CISV does in a language that is fun and a joy to read. The map is of course a world map, only you need to step back from a Eurocentric point of view and accept that not everything is to everyone like you are used to. It might be difficult to take, but CISV has become a dynamic organisation that looks forward, questions how things have always been done, while preserving the core of what we do. The peace education circle was a bad way to explain what peace education is - mosquito tactics is a very good way to do so.

    Bastian

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